hi, babe! don't know if you know, but there /is/ a While You Were Sleeping AU. it's lilo, though. but it's quite good! i recommend it. archiveofourown*org/works/688784 love you!
Wait, did I publicly mention my desire for a H/L While You Were Sleeping AU?! Because I want one. Very much. So very, very much. Enough so that I may possibly consider writing one. Maybe.
Thanks for the rec! I might check it out (my to-read list is epic, ah), but I’m afraid Lilo is one of those pairings that doesn’t really hold my interest, not even when it’s written by brilliant authors…
hiiii, do u think grammar/coherence and cohesion mistakes affect a fic to the point where you just cant read it? (…) what do u think? thanks!
I definitely think mistakes can affect reading pleasure; I know that if there are too many, I find it so distracting that I can’t focus on the story. (Although it’s quite possible that as a non-native speaker, I might focus on different things; e.g. for me, things like constantly mixing up his/he’s or it’s/its are quite distracting whereas others might find it more difficult to overlook grammar mistakes.) It’s not the same for everyone, though, and some people mind less than others!
Also, sorry for censoring part of your ask. I thought it had a chance of making someone unhappy, so I took out that bit. But the fic you mentioned, I vaguely remember that it might have been similar for me. Tastes differ, though! And it’s good that they do. How boring would it be if we all liked the same things? So never feel bad for not liking something others like very much. :)